UFS 211- Unit 9: Editing and Revising (Task 8)

In the movie much that I have seen, I had to choose one of them is themovie 2012 movie. Because the movie storyline was very interesting forme. In the story this movie tells the story of events that have occurred on Earth, such as earth quakes, tsunamis, and more. Between the main characters in this story is (John Cusack, Chilwetel, Eljiofor, Thandie Newton Laura, Kate Amanda Peet, Oliver Plat Carl An heuser, Danny Glover and Woody Harrelson). In addition, this story has made several contents of thestory in this movie among the natural disaster has occurred and has destroyed the earth. Since the year 2012 has been tied to a prophecy that debated the so-called virtual end of this year as billions of anonymous characters who were killed in adegen mass destruction as (earth quakes, tsunamis, and more) and this destruction of non-stop stream of one place to another and also boley frightening to the public. Among other things, is when I have a situation like this, I will do something before the occurrence of something like this and can only pray that protected and facilitated all what happened. In addition, this story is very interesting and has a story that will create awareness to all.

UFS 211- Unit 6: Mechanics/Grammar (Task 6)

The weakness of the English language among students and graduates endless spoken of mass media and print media to this day. Dizziness parents, teachers of English dizziness, headache principals, dizziness Education Minister, Minister of Higher Education dizzy, dizzy with the employer's proficiency level is still weak among students and graduates, especially the Malays.

I am experiencing the same as other students. I find it hard to master the English language, especially to write an essay. I often make mistakes in spelling, I spelled the word wrong often. besides, I find it hard to write long words. I am also confused the purpose behind words, I find it hard to make writing in English because they could not understand the meaning of the verse.

YES. I find writing in English is hard because I do not understand the meaning of the word in English. I also have a problem bound to change the word Malay to English. this made it hard to, to write long sentences in the essay.

Next, I also have problems when to start sentences when writing, I do not know how to start the first sentence to make compositions. sometimes I am confused to combine an active sentence with passive sentences, the subject has been difficult for me to make a long essay.

Conclusion, all parties must work together to help students who are difficult to learn English. Parents also play an important role to help children master English by continuously provide the impetus and encouragement to never give up, to learn the language. We also must strive to increase reading English books and try to find and understand the meanings behind the words we do not know. In addition, we also need to always practice to write an essay in English and try to bound to change the signs to Malay English to understand purpose of the verse.

UFS 211-unit 5: Writing a Paragraph (Task 5)

Water Pollution 

         Water pollution is the contamination of water bodies example lakes, rivers, oceans, aquifers and groundwater. Water pollution occurs when pollutants are discharged directly or indirectly into water bodies without adequate treatment to remove harmful compounds. Nowadays, water is important to people in our country. Why water is important to people ? water is being use by all people in our country. Water is use for bath, cook and so on. We also use water for drink. But why nowadays happen water pollution ? The pollution linked with all sorts solution chemical, toxic, and waste matter. The solvents water to make  easy and we water source. Now, many causes water soiled even not a good beginning to fetch may be will human life dangerous. Between the specific contaminants leading to pollution in water include a wide spectrum of chemicals, pathogens, and physical or sensory changes such as elevated temperature and discoloration. While many of the chemicals and substances that are regulated may be naturally occurring (calcium, sodium, iron, manganese, etc.) the concentration is often the key in determining what is a natural component of water, and what is a contaminant. High concentrations of naturally-occurring substances can have negative impacts on aquatic flora and fauna. Beside that Oxygen-depleting substances may be natural materials, such as plant matter (e.g. leaves and grass) as well as man-made chemicals. More than natural and anthropogenic substances may cause turbidity (cloudiness) which blocks light and disrupts plant growth, and clogs the gills of some fish species. While the many of the chemical substances are toxic. Pathogens can produce waterborne diseases in either human or animal hosts. Alteration of water's physical chemistry includes acidity (change in pH), electrical conductivity, temperature, and eutrophication. Eutrophication is an increase in the concentration of chemical nutrients in an ecosystem to an extent that increases in the primary productivity of the ecosystem. Depending on the degree of eutrophication, subsequent negative environmental effects such as anoxia (oxygen depletion) and severe reductions in water quality may occur, affecting fish and other animal populations..The conclusion,  water pollution to shape a social problems which need to work together  from responsibility  on behalf. We must to take not that we  clean environment and  safe for life. Legislation step important for solve this problems. Awareness to go by education environment also can stem this phenomenon.

UFS 211- Unit 4: Introduction Of a Paragraph (Task 4)

In this writing is very much for taking the time before we begin to process of writing, we need to take time to think, to begin this writing. Process writing also involves thinking very much to make the process all at the same verse. This process is known as communication, writing process is one step away from writing for the test to learn our language to communicate the ideas and experiences. And it also takes very much to finish writing process. Writing process has been divided into five processes of writing, such as planning, revising, editing and publishing the planning stage. Planning stage is the titles of defining and has decided these ideas will be used. Will then decide how to order these ideas. Sometimes, this topic will make it Easier in this article. And it is also very important in taking each step in the process of writing and every order. In Reading and Listening, the information has been put to that use research in their own words and writes sentences in paragraphs although not perfect and has read what is written, then the show to others and ask for suggestions. Among other things, re check the works has been changed, by rewriting the whole paragraph and have included all the information will be needed by the reader. In Reading and Listening, the slight increase in editing is different from the review of sentences and individual words and editing must be done after making a major revision. After That, the stage of review, have been referring to evaluate our text for the language and technical than content, and this is the part where we have been Able to thoroughly scan test for accuracy of our language. Finally, is the issue, which we will perform the work themselves.

UFS 211- Unit 3: Process Writing (Tesk 3)

The use of 'process writing' we need the basics of writing that we need to think before we started the "process writing". Before we begin the process of writing, we should begin by collecting the attention that will be used, it is up to the writers. Now there are a few ideas as startling information. For example, this information may be important facts to illustrate the point of writing that you wish to make. By using the information surprising that it is followed by punishment, anecdotes and dialogues. Anecdote is a short anecdotal stories that illustrate, point and related to the topic of writing. And this anecdote should be used with care. While the dialogue is the need to identify the speakers, but readers should understand the dialogue that we want to. With this, the dialogue was followed by a sentence or two description. In addition, the process of writing also has a brief to explain our topic. In general you can read slowly to the thesis. And each sentence will reach the thesis writing. In addition, attention collector notice only one or two sentences, by adding to the opening of writing a thesis statement. In conclusion, all the verses to follow any set formula.

UFS 211- Unit 2: Sentence Structure (task 2)

 Compound sentence

1.  I tried to speak Spanish, and my friend tried to speak English. 

2.  Alejandro played football, so Maria went shopping.

3.  Mary and Samantha arrived at the library before noon, and they left by cab before i 
4.  The little girl agreed that they should eat more K, but her friend disagreed.

5.  Mira hid under the bed, while Lenny hid in the cabinet.

6.  Sharul went shopping, so Shelby played netball.

7.  I tried to speak Spanish, and my friend tried to speak French.

8.  I went hiking, but my friend went jogging.

9.  My dog likes to eat grass, even though she's not allowed.

10. The dog like to play fetch, while the cat likes to roll in the grass.

11. I got an A on my test, even though I did not have a lot of time to study.

12. Meg brought the food, so Kate set the table.

 Complex sentences.


 1.   Because the bridge wasn't properly maintained by the government, it fell down.
 2.  Although he ate a really big dinner, now he wants to eat cake for dessert.
 3.   Whenever they eat at this restaurant, they order a hamburger and fries.
4.   He'll be able to maintain a healthy weight if he keeps exercising.
 5.   Because the world is getting warmer, polar bears are in danger of becoming  extinct.
6.   When he handed in his homework, he forgot to give the teacher the last page.
7.   The teacher returned the homework after she noticed the error. 
 8.   The students are studying because they have a test tomorrow.
 9.   After they finished studying, Marry and Maria went to the movies.
10.   Andi and Jery went to the movies after they finished studying.


 Compound – complex sentence.

1. We enlarged our house, and after we had finished the work, we moved to Hawaii never returned.

2. The vacation should be restful, but many people take vacations that are never resful.

3. Dad went fishing, but Mom stayed home because she wanted to be there when Terri arrival.

4.   Although I enjoy shopping, I haven't been to the mall in two weeks, and I am broke!

5.   If I earn money from my chores, I will buy a new purse, but I don't get my allowance

6.   Annie lived in the north, but the Sheena, who knew she was rich, lived in the side.

7.   Though her answers are proved correct, but one of our classmate said not

  our teacher also said that it is wrong, which who do not really understand the sentence.

8.  Cody residing at St. Claire, and Levi residing at St. Mary, since they are far from

     each other, they are still good friends.

9.  If Barack Obama is the nominee for the Democratic Party, he'll run against John

    McCain, but it won't be an easy contest to win.

UFS 211-Unit 1: Pre-Writing.

Love? In my opinion, this love there is a wide range of feelings such as love of God and his Messenger, love for his family and love to the believers. In addition, the nature of love is not the spoken word of mouth, but love is very beautiful gifts from God and holy. If people can assess its purity, and love is like day and night, moon and stars. This love is like we love someone, and we will always pray for her even though he was not on our side. In addition, the meaning of love for Islamic view is one that is in the nature of the human heart. With the emergence of a feeling of love is pure i. You also have a sense of love and human compassion. Thus, without the feeling of love that a person will feel emptiness in their souls. In addition, the love will come to those who still have hope, despite the hurt. Further, this love is also some advantage and disadvantages. Among its advantages is, love is one of the immortality and peace to someone with love and love is not an object which can be viewed with the naked eye, meaning that only love can be felt through the heart and mood. In fact, this love can also make yourself a real person. And when we fall in love with someone, we will feel happiness, but all would be difficult to pass through when the situation has changed. As the saying goes, love is easy, to be loved is also quite easy. But to be loved by someone we love is hard to come by. And while bad love, is love too often been forced to release the passion of a passion. Therefore, there is all kinds of things that are damaging people and will lead to vices and the destruction of a person, especially to the youth of today who are preoccupied with love without any evaluation and consideration of their own minds. In addition, there is also love in problems that occur in a serious matter at hand. For example, social blemish that they were willing to kill and commit suicide due to depression are difficult to control emotions.